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Photo Forum / General Photo Topics / General Topics / October 2006Critique sought - long exposures of Coastal scenes
These are of Durdle Door and Lulworth cove on the Dorset 'Jurassic' Coast. This is the first time I've done any exposures of this sort of length - Would welcome any critque -constructive hopefully. http://www.srsteel.co.uk/Landscape/slides/Durdle%20Door%20Sunset.html 'Durdle Door at Sunset' 6 secs exposure at f22. 18-55mm lens @ 18mm http://www.srsteel.co.uk/Landscape/slides/Durdle%20Door.html 'Durdle Door in Twilight' 15 sec exposure at f22. 18-55mm lens @ 18mm http://www.srsteel.co.uk/Landscape/slides/Lulworth%20Cove.html 'Lulworth cove in Twilight' 20 secs exposure at f22. 18-55mm lens @ 18mm Thanks in anticpation... Simon www.srsteel.co.uk http://www.srsteel.co.uk/Panorama Panorama gallery - Lake District and other locations http://www.srsteel.co.uk/landscape Landscape - Views, primarily, of the UK http://www.srsteel.co.uk/Peru A Journey through the land of the Incas lovely shots.. kk > These are of Durdle Door and Lulworth cove on the Dorset 'Jurassic' Coast. > This is the first time I've done any exposures of this sort of length - [quoted text clipped - 17 lines] > http://www.srsteel.co.uk/Peru A Journey through the land of the > Incas >These are of Durdle Door and Lulworth cove on the Dorset 'Jurassic' Coast. >This is the first time I've done any exposures of this sort of length - [quoted text clipped - 6 lines] >http://www.srsteel.co.uk/Landscape/slides/Lulworth%20Cove.html >'Lulworth cove in Twilight' 20 secs exposure at f22. 18-55mm lens @ 18mm Gorgeous. In the past my efforts were spoiled by neglecting to cover the viewfinder resulting in light leaking in. Makes it worth lugging a tripod around! I'm inspired to try again. Dave. <http://www.henniker.org.uk> 3000 photos especially Edinburgh & Scotland. + 3D rendered art, old ads etc but no other ads... * délété david to email me * Lovely work, but is it just my screen or do they have some pretty bad jpeg artefacts around the edges? They deserve better treatment, so maybe check your workflow to identify where the quality loss occurs..! (unless it's my eyes... (O:) Beautiful landscapes. I need to get the hang of long exposures like that. Just like Dave I forgot to shut the viewfinder last time and on top of that I'm using film which starts to respond strangely at multiple second exposures. Encourages me to play again this weekend. Just a tip, would it be possible to include a bit more exif data on your JAlbum site? I'd love to know how long you exposed for, at what ISO, aperture, etc. Keep them coming. Rich  SignatureReplace .invalid with .com to email. expanding the exif data is something I want to do... I hadn't noticed the jpeg artifacts.. thanks for pointing it out... maybe they come from the compression factor that I've applied to the jpegs to keep the image file sizes small. The original tiffs don't show it. Signaturewww.srsteel.co.uk http://www.srsteel.co.uk/Panorama http://www.srsteel.co.uk/landscape http://www.srsteel.co.uk/Peru > > Beautiful landscapes. I need to get the hang of long exposures like that. [quoted text clipped - 9 lines] > > Rich Verrrrry Nice... The only critique I'd say is more like; the sunset one is the one where we wish we had just that tad wider lense... Very nice all the same, well done! Bill > These are of Durdle Door and Lulworth cove on the Dorset 'Jurassic' Coast. > This is the first time I've done any exposures of this sort of length - [quoted text clipped - 17 lines] > http://www.srsteel.co.uk/Peru A Journey through the land of the > Incas simon burbled to the world: > These are of Durdle Door and Lulworth cove on the Dorset 'Jurassic' > Coast. This is the first time I've done any exposures of this sort of > length - Would welcome any critque -constructive hopefully. Beautifull, beautiful, beautiful. Chris SignatureOh life is a glorious cycle of song, A medley of extemporanea. And love is a thing that can never go wrong And I am Marie, of Rumania. ---Dorothy Parker Very beautiful lot. I like the impressionistic quality to them and your use of color. rgds Ken thanks, all. for your input.. Simon. Signaturewww.srsteel.co.uk http://www.srsteel.co.uk/Panorama http://www.srsteel.co.uk/landscape http://www.srsteel.co.uk/Peru > Very beautiful lot. I like the impressionistic quality to them and > your use of color. > rgds > Ken There's an issue of over-processing with all three but it's especially disruptive on the first you link to. I can understand the reasoning behind trying to reign-in the dynamic range but in this case it's way too much. Compositionally they're a little 'safe'. On the second two a much lower camera position would really help. So would getting right over the surf on Durdle Door.jpg -- Simon http://www.simonstanmore.com http://www.pbase.com/stanmore > These are of Durdle Door and Lulworth cove on the Dorset 'Jurassic' Coast. > This is the first time I've done any exposures of this sort of length - [quoted text clipped - 17 lines] > http://www.srsteel.co.uk/Peru A Journey through the land of the > Incas |
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