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Phast1 - 27 Jul 2005 20:39 GMT
I'm an amateur enthusiast (prosumer). I spend more than I can afford
on photography (but I love it).

I got my 20D 2 months ago. Here's some of my favorites for your critique.

http://www.phast1x.com/digits.html

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Phast1
Mike Kohary - 27 Jul 2005 22:13 GMT
> I'm an amateur enthusiast (prosumer). I spend more than I can afford
> on photography (but I love it).
>
> I got my 20D 2 months ago. Here's some of my favorites for your
> critique.
> http://www.phast1x.com/digits.html

Very good work for an "amateur enthusiast".  :)  I don't think you're using
the stock lens; what are you using?  You're getting great sharpness, I'm
guessing it's an "L" lens.  Several of the pictures are simply lovely:

http://www.phast1x.com/pix/IMG_2981.jpg
http://www.phast1x.com/pix/IMG_0620_Framed.jpg
http://www.phast1x.com/pix/IMG_2312.jpg
http://www.phast1x.com/pix/IMG_1234_Framed.jpg (great example of a good
"photojournalistic" shot, for the poster I was talking to yesterday about
improving their snapshots into photographs.)

This one is gorgeous, but with the caveat that it's a bit greenish,
especially noticeable in the sky.  I'd play with the color balance a little
bit, and then you'd have a perfect shot:

http://www.phast1x.com/pix/IMG_2382.jpg

This one is a good shot that's seriously underexposed:

http://www.phast1x.com/pix/IMG_2825.jpg  (might be fixable in Photoshop,
otherwise I'd discard it)

I would discard this one from the collection:

http://www.phast1x.com/pix/IMG_2505_1.jpg

It's a "near miss", but the composition just doesn't work.  The deer's head
is dead center, and the branches that fill the entire left half of the frame
are terribly distracting.  One branch even intrudes onto the deer's face.  I
know you're digging the sharpness of the deer, which is indeed nice, but
sometimes you have to acknowledge that you have a picture that isn't working
as well as you'd like it to.  :)  That's ok, these are actually great
pictures to have sometimes, because you learn the most from your "near
misses", I think.

The others all have merit, and if that's what you can shoot after 2 months,
imagine what you'll be shooting like a year or 5 years from now.  Keep at it
and keep us posted!

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Phast1 - 28 Jul 2005 00:57 GMT
"Mike Kohary" <sorry@no.spam> wrote in message :

> Very good work for an "amateur enthusiast".  :)  I don't think you're
> using the stock lens; what are you using?  You're getting great sharpness,
> I'm guessing it's an "L" lens.

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Yes, 'L' Lenses except for the ef-s 10-22mm.
17-40L, 24-70L,70-200L IS, 1.4x extender
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>Several of the pictures are simply lovely:
>
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> http://www.phast1x.com/pix/IMG_2825.jpg  (might be fixable in Photoshop,
> otherwise I'd discard it)

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I toyed with it in RAW but didn't want to wash out
the sky so I left it. I justified it to myself by saying
"It's like a NIKE ad"
;)
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> I would discard this one from the collection:
>
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> actually great pictures to have sometimes, because you learn the most from
> your "near misses", I think.

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Very good to read your professional critique on this one.
I see what you're saying now and hope to see that
before my next press of the shutter button.
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> The others all have merit, and if that's what you can shoot after 2
> months, imagine what you'll be shooting like a year or 5 years from now.
> Keep at it and keep us posted!

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Used a film SLR, only on AUTO mode for 3 years.
Basically snapshots and toying with composition.
I've been reading alot, including here, very helpful thank you.
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Thanks for the comments Mike,
Phast1

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Mike Kohary - 30 Jul 2005 02:51 GMT
> "Mike Kohary" <sorry@no.spam> wrote in message :
>
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> ;)
> --------------------------------------------------

It's still a good shot, and I changed my mind - I wouldn't discard it after
all.

>> The others all have merit, and if that's what you can shoot after 2
>> months, imagine what you'll be shooting like a year or 5 years from
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> Used a film SLR, only on AUTO mode for 3 years.
> Basically snapshots and toying with composition.

That is precisely how I started as well.  Bought a film SLR for my
daughter's birth, used it for 5 years, then bought a digital point-and-shoot
and never looked back (today I shoot with a Canon 20D).  I learned as much
about photography in the first year of owning the digital as I did in all 5
years of owning the film camera.  The instant feedback of digital is simply
priceless.

Good luck to you!

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