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> Hello, at http://www.stefanomartellucci.com/chiara/chiara.htm there are the
> portrait's photos of Chiara, what do you think?
Nice lighting, attractive model, well done.

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Condor - 30 Jan 2005 18:21 GMT
>> Hello, at http://www.stefanomartellucci.com/chiara/chiara.htm there are the
>> portrait's photos of Chiara, what do you think?
>
> Nice lighting, attractive model, well done.
Thank you for visit and comment.

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"Bisogna essere duri senza mai perdere la tenerezza" - Ernesto Che Guevara
Very nice work...but.... (O;
1. A bit too much contrast, IMO - would like to see just a little
detail in that black dress - esp. shot nos 2,3,5,7. But see note at
end..
2. Poses in some shots look just a little awkward - eg her left ankle
in 1., her left shoulder in 5.
3. I like the use of white space, but I think you need either less, or
more, of her backside in 2. And the lack of detail in the black dress
makes that area of her look just a bit odd..
4. Lighting is very good, but maybe pay a little more attention to the
slanting grey patches on the floor extending to the left of 5. and 7.
My comment about the contrast may be a little harsh, as by tweaking the
images a little, there *is* detail hidden away in that black dress!
But I think my monitor is adjusted fairly well for Gamma - the
information is mostly down in the 2s and 3s, out of 255 brightness
levels - and that's invisible on most screens.. be interested to hear
other's opinions.
Overall, I would be happy if all my portraiture was at that level or
above.. Well done!
Condor - 30 Jan 2005 18:24 GMT
> Very nice work...but.... (O;
>
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> Overall, I would be happy if all my portraiture was at that level or
> above.. Well done!
Thank you for visit and for your analisys. The monitor is calibrated with
Colorvision and it's ok when I print.

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