Hello, Duca -
You obviously are enjoying your photography and you and your models are
having fun together. That was wonderful to see through your photos.
In your Roxy photos, I most enjoyed the ones that you and she were relating
to each other, such as in this one:
<http://www.lucianomorpurgo.com/foto/roxy/slides/IMG_7531.html>
I did not care for the ones that she was looking away at something. I also
liked:
<http://www.lucianomorpurgo.com/foto/roxy/slides/IMG_7586.html>
It has a little intrigue with the foliage framing her face.
Too many of them looked posed and artificial, such as this
one:<http://www.lucianomorpurgo.com/foto/roxy/slides/IMG_7606.html>
In your Giaga gallery, I would make much the same comments. This is awkward
and posed:
<http://www.lucianomorpurgo.com/foto/giada12%2D2005/slides/IMG_6691.html>
And this looks great - natural and comfortable:
<http://www.lucianomorpurgo.com/foto/giada12%2D2005/slides/IMG_6650.html>
I like the natural lighting also - much better than the harsh on-camera
flash that ruins some of the images.
Keep up the good work, I would simply suggest keep shooting and edit out the
weakest shots from your galleries and albums. In my opinion, it is much
better to offer a few excellent shots than to water it all down with some
weaker shots included.

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Larry Maupin
Maupin Photography
Freelance Garden Writer/Photographer
Member, Garden Writers Assoc.
Dallas, TX 214/341-3933
> Hi, I'm a "serious amateur" photographer - doing it only for hobby - and I'd
> like to receive comments on the photo albums I made with two girls. Outdoor,
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> Ciao
> Duca V